A friend of mine often says when he wants to explain something:
One word is not sufficient, but two are already too much.
I really like Zen koans and I have a book of 101 zen koans - I think it is this set. What I like is that the wise men mostly response with just one sentence.
When talking with people I notice that when I talk much, they anyway might remember just a few sentences - but which ones?
Try to say it with less sentences - being those that are remembered...
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